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Offline Serra Belvoule

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Serra & the whispers
« on: September 24, 2010, 09:01:21 pm »
Because of the previous interest on my latest thread, I decided I'd throw in some of my old poetry. In a way, I hope this will be a way to compare old and new and thus grow as an artist.
I will open this thread with a very old piece of writing. I hope you enjoy it.


~o~~o~~o~~o~~
Embrace

The night was calm, the lake still,
inside the silence I felt it was real
The wind was warm, my fur so calm
Inside the old mountain Alm

Watching stars in the dark sky
I felt my soul beside them fly
The eternal song inside my heart
would never let this lone man part

I sat in the grass, waiting for you
I waited for you, and your waited too
The time went by with no sign of yours
as I detached the boat from the moor

The boat went by, never returned
I watched it go straight, unturned.
The night went by, and almost dawned
loneliness inside I finally found

I wanted to cry, you weren't here
My heartful lover, crimson deer.
I waited long for you to come
behind the always starry dome

I stood up, ready to go
a feeling behind me told me no
I felt your arms around my body
I smiled, you were here already.
« Last Edit: October 02, 2010, 09:19:46 pm by Serra Belvoule »
I ate a bag of grapes and now I own the world.

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Re: Serra & the whispers
« Reply #1 on: September 26, 2010, 09:03:55 am »
Gah..I thought I responded to this already. Dx Sounds like you were dedicating this to someone. x:

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Re: Serra & the whispers
« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2010, 10:14:03 pm »
Gah..I thought I responded to this already. Dx Sounds like you were dedicating this to someone. x:
It was a long time ago so I might be wrong, but I think I was writing this to nobody in particular.
« Last Edit: October 02, 2010, 09:19:56 pm by Serra Belvoule »
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Re: Serra & the whispers
« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2010, 09:25:19 pm »
Here's another one for your enjoyment. This one is from the time I was happy  (:


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Return
The once thought lost love has been recovered
And all hidden thoughts have been uncovered
The owner of my heart has at last returned
After having left my hear for long stoned

My heart was once frozen, now it is not
It is now melting for your so hot love
You hold deep inside the key to my heart
Nothing will ever turn you and me apart

Winters were cold, lightning cracked so strong
but all those things could be held for long
There's one thing, though, that I can't survive
It's you being away, I can't keep alive

Strong winds of change and promise are here
Your lovely voice the only thing I hear
Your heart next to mine, our hands holding tight
I stare at your eyes, such beautiful sight

Time's not important, neither space
I care of nothing whatever the case
For I am with you, forever I'll be
I'll be at your side, and you'll be with me.
I ate a bag of grapes and now I own the world.