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Offline Wolf Kid

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Kid's Poetry Collection
« on: February 28, 2013, 11:22:16 am »
Over the years, I have developed some great poems. Here are a few.

1. Souls of the Dead

The Souls of the Dead
I hear them in my slumber
begging to be freed

They wander throughout the night
They desire peace
while seeking freedom from life

Trapped between two worlds
Spirits residing in life
but are clearly dead

How can I hear these dead souls?
I dare to say
For you might think I am ill

Lost Souls of the Dead
I hear them in my slumber
Fighting to be freed.

2. Onward West

Onward west
They say its the best
Fertile land and grand soil
that will eventually spoil

Onward West
I am missing it less and less
There will be treasures and gold
or so I am told

Onward West
I now need to rest
I have made it at last
and I leave with these final words
Onward West
« Last Edit: February 28, 2013, 11:26:08 am by Wolf Kid »


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Re: Kid's Poetry Collection
« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2013, 09:52:49 pm »
heres one i did in 5TH grade ill try to remeber
 

I see the ladder  
in the darkness i reach i start climbing
the ladder out of all darkness
i climb
the ladder begins to disappear i hurry
but its to late



then there is just darkness..................................
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Re: Kid's Poetry Collection
« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2013, 09:57:20 pm »
heres one i did in 5TH grade ill try to remeber
 

I see the ladder  
in the darkness i reach i start climbing
the ladder out of all darkness
i climb
the ladder begins to disappear i hurry
but its to late



then there is just darkness..................................

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Re: Kid's Poetry Collection
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2013, 10:06:46 pm »
yah i guess it wouldve been better i might actully thx  Kobuk you always seem to know what to do :)
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