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Offline Silver

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The Wolf Pest
« on: May 03, 2003, 07:09:42 am »
This was actually supposed to be comedic, but when I finished it for my english I lost it and decided to see if I could remember it.  It went off in a completely different direction and became a very moving poem (at the time) whenever I look at my poetry I can't say that I am ever impressed simply disappointed that I didn't put something there or change it this way.  However I was always told to be careful otherwise I would change it TOO much...Here it is anyhow.

The Wolf Pest

As I lie in my warm bed,
The ghostly figure walks towards me,
This figure I know and yet have never seen before,
It is of course the wolf pest.

A sliver of moonlight flitters through the curtains,
Illuminating for one quick moment the sleek and shiny fur,
It is the one that torments me,
It is of course the wolf pest.

Bane of my life and yet my best friend,
He knocks down books and breaks glass,
Cracks the vases  and sends the papers fluttering in the wind,
It is of course the wolf pest.

I cannot sleep and stare at the beauty that I so hate,
And yet with that hate comes a love to deep to describe,
Its eyes full of excitement and things that no man shall ever see,
It is of course the wolf pest.

As I sleep fitfully,
He will stalk me in my dreams,
He will invade my mind and show me his world
It is of course the wolf pest.

My mind will fuse with his and I will be confused,
My Human side will melt away,
All I will be is the wolf
I am of course…The wolf pest.

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I wasn't sure whether I should have started a new thread or not *shrugs* if I shouldn't the someone please tell me.  I think the main reason I'm showing all this is because posting up on a board isn't as embarrasing as handing it to someone and them reading it *shrugs again* go figure '<img'> anyway I hope you enjoyed it as muc hI I enjoyed writing at the time.
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The Wolf Pest
« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2003, 10:13:29 am »
Thats a very nice poem Silver,

Very strong and full of understanding.

Keep up the great work.

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« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2003, 04:20:00 pm »
Another nice poem, Silver!

Yes, you can post under the same topic as before. You can always change the header to fit more of your poetry. I don't think it really matters though.
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« Reply #3 on: May 04, 2003, 11:17:38 pm »
Now why didn't you tell me you could write like this hmmmm *tap's heavy foot on floor waiting for a reply*  well what you have too say for yourself , you've beem hideing you're talent well is all i'll say. very good stuff m8 we should co'operate on something in the near future  '<img'> .
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