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Offline Rilin

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Things Change
« on: June 29, 2010, 09:31:17 am »
Alright, first poem here. I wrote this when I was feeling a little down about someone who I used to be good friends with, but we've drifted apart. Enjoy!

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Things change
...

   ...Present becomes past...
               future becomes

         present.

Person, people, he and she come and go
but memories remain,

                still so very clear.
             Cursed with longing to step
behind us
                    into moments that
exist
no
more,

but ignore the moments that are
                   yet
                       to
                          occur.

We cannot change
what has been done

but may we live instead


for tomorrow.

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Re: Things Change
« Reply #1 on: June 29, 2010, 12:01:31 pm »
I really like this poem. It's very deep and meaningful and I like how you used the spacing.  Sorry about the friend.  :(
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Re: Things Change
« Reply #2 on: June 29, 2010, 05:30:31 pm »
I really like this poem. It's very deep and meaningful and I like how you used the spacing.  Sorry about the friend.  :(
Thank you so much. ^^ I tried to do the spacing how I did it on the paper. XD
And don't worry about it, that's why I wrote this poem, to remind myself that just because people change dosen't mean that we weren't ever friends before, and that there will be opportunities to meet new people in the future. :)