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Offline ColonelMustang

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Time
« on: June 29, 2013, 02:08:05 am »
So this is a short poem I wrote when I was in a really dark place, please feel free to leave critiques.

-Time-

Time will always have its way with me
Time will always play with me
Time will wear me down
Time will tear me apart
While I'm killing time, Time is killing me
Sarzon! <-- inside joke


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Re: Time
« Reply #1 on: July 11, 2013, 12:56:47 am »
I like it, short and simple ina good way.

But personaly, time is an illusion.